CR Response: Pg 169-174, 181-193

Once more we depart into the lands of the Curious Researcher, in search of knowledge which will aid in our plight of constructing a good paper. And lo’! We seem to have stumbled upon that very thing, thanks to our professor’s guidance. Rather than continue on as if I were writing a fantasy novel though, I believe it’s time to discuss what I’ve discovered.

Procrastination is the first topic which is looked at. Many students are familiar with this, as they are active contributors to the problem. Now while this does work sometimes for some people, one could probably produce a better paper by starting earlier on, as you have time to develop ideas and make corrections. This is especially important when one wants to strengthen an argument by presenting the other side of a topic. Often the other side is presented and dismissed without much reason when the writer is short on time, and it makes for a very fragile argument when one cannot defend their position. I often catch myself making choices which lead to me procrastinating, and as the target of this point, I feel Bruce is correct on all counts.

The next bit o’ text tells us about how to personalize an essay, as well as a few ideas on how to think up an intro. A question, comparison/contrast or a quote are all excellent ways to begin, but one needs to make sure they don’t generalize. I often do as Ballinger does and create a few different introductions, than find which one I prefer and attempt to perfect it. Seems we two are similar in that respect, but the way in which we write is differentiated by how we choose to personalize our paper.

Personalizing a paper, as Ballinger states, is deciding on whether or not to use “I”. Using this letter as a standalone must be done cautiously, as overuse can make the paper seem egotistical. The use of “I think/believe/feel that…” also makes the essay seem to revolve around you, though it is unlikely you’re the main topic of the discussion taking place within the text. Voice is also a key part to personalizing a paper, as it will change in order to hold a higher appeal to your expected audience. One does not want to send a letter to a boss and write it as if one was writing to a best friend.

All of Mr. Ballinger’s ideas are sure to prove helpful in writing, namely with the introduction as it is often the most difficult bit of an essay to write; tied with the conclusion I would say. Bringing up Bruce’s thoughts on procrastination a week before it’s due was more than likely a tactful move by the English 102 professor to serve as a reminder of how much time remains. It has certainly forced my hands to concoct an intro. I’ll be sure to get right to work with my remaining time…as soon as I finish this sandwitch.